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今天小编分享一篇4月13日托福考试独立写作真题范文一篇,大家一起来学习~

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题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology like computers, smart phones and video games for fun and entertainment while playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for children's development.


你是否同意以下观点?

如今,孩子们过于依赖电脑、智能手机和电子游戏等科技来娱乐,而玩更简单的玩具或与朋友在户外玩耍对孩子的发展会更好。


思路:

首段:陈述现象,阐明观点;

理由段1:沉迷电子产品的害处;

理由段2:玩简单玩具或户外游戏的益处;

结论:重新总结陈述观点。


范文:

In this digital age, it is not uncommon to see children playing their cellphones, iPad or laptop all the time. They find fun from them but show no interest in simpler toys or playing outside with their friends. From my point of view, it is better for children to play with simpler toys or to play outside with friends.


First of all, the drawbacks of playing technological products for too long are obvious. The most troublesome and irreversible risk is their harm to health. Staring at the screen for a long time may cause shortsightedness and cervical spondylopathy might occur after continuous exposure. Besides, since children are too young to pull themselves out of those addictive applications and games, their obsession will distract them from schoolwork. It is really a terrible truth. I even read a piece of news about a 13-year-old boy who dropped out of school and had disappeared for 1 month, staying in an Internet bar playing LOL, the most population online game back then, leaving his parents desperately worrying about his safety.


On the contrary, playing with simple toys or playing outside with friends is interesting while not obsessive. Best of all, simple toys hardly have any potential damage to their health. For example, Lego bricks can make children to create different shapes and then they really enjoy their contribution to a materialized outcome. These simple toys will build their characters, foster good qualities. And when they playing outside with their friends, they will make new friends, share their ideas, and do something they cannot do when facing technological products. Take my younger sister as an example. When she is playing outside with children at her age, we are always surprised to find that she becomes generous and openhanded. However, when she is staying at home, playing computer games, she shows aggressiveness and selfishness.


Therefore, in terms of children’s physical and mental health, it is better to spend more time with their friends outdoor.


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