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很多同学在参加完6月18日的雅思考试之后都感觉自己的大作文写得不太理想。今天我们就来看一下留学监理网老师的深度解析,希望可以帮你指点迷津。

Some people think schools should teach students to form good behavior in addition to providing formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

本次考试的题目属于教育类范畴,看到题目之后,大部分的学生都会选择同意题干中的观点也就是学校除了进行正常的教学之外,还要教给学生良好的行为举止。

对于大部分学生来说,本文最大的难点在于寻找例证。接下来我们就来写一个提纲,中间加入我们需要的例证:

第一段:开头--agree

第二段:good behavior对personal development也很重要

例证:面试的时候要dress well,要professional

第三段:good behavior对我们很重要,是成为qualified citizen的必要条件,做人要polite,要respect他人

例证:欧洲杯赛场上的football hooligans

第四段:总结--conclusion

接下来我们看一下留学监理网老师的范文:

Sample Response

In recent years, there has been a heated discussion about the role school plays in children’s education. Now there is a growing number of people declaring that schools should teach their pupils to conduct themselves and make them know virtues of humanity. Personally, I am in much favor of this claim and I will discuss it in my essay.

To begin with, good behavior can help with your personal development. People with good behavior know how to dress and talk in different occasions, which will make them easier to be successful. One of my friends is an HR manager who interviews people. He told me that good behavior is very important for the interviewees, because good behavior makes people look professional and professionalism is what companies value very much. Someone who is sloppy or unpolite is not trustworthy and unlikely to be employed.

What's more, having good behavior is the foundation of being a qualified citizen in our society nowadays. A person with good behavior is always polite, modest and respect others and abide by the laws and moral principals. European Cup is such a great sports game and attracts many football fans and match viewers from around the world. However, the wonderful games are not the only focus; the football hooligans drew people’s attention by their great “deed” in France. They have fought on the streets, destroyed several cafes and bars and even caused injuries of many innocent people. If those football hooligans had been educated well and been given a lesson about how to have good behavior, they wouldn’t have been so violent..

Clearly, good behavior has many impact in our lives which will affect our first impression and integrity. As a consequence, schools should pay more attention to students’ behavior and teach them to form good behavior in addition to providing formal education.



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