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由于国外院校录取分数稳定不变的趋势,雅思考试中每个部分的难度自然提升,写作考官对于雅思作文的评比也越来越严苛。所以,要实现学生们的留学梦,还要从雅思写作上多下功夫,提升写作能力。那么想要提升自己的雅思作文水平也不是一件难事,今天留学监理网的小编就给大家分析下如何能够提高写作能力。看完就会发现,其实也没有辣么难!

由于国外院校录取分数稳定不变的趋势,雅思考试中每个部分的难度自然提升,写作考官对于雅思作文的评比也越来越严苛。所以,要实现学生们的留学梦,还要从雅思写作上多下功夫,提升写作能力。那么想要提升自己的雅思作文水平也不是一件难事,今天留学监理网的小编就给大家分析下如何能够提高写作能力。看完就会发现,其实也没有辣么难!


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考鸭们在写作的时候一定要有目标,也就是要想写作的评分标准靠拢,这样才能入得了考官们的法眼,拿到宝贵的分数。下面就跟留学监理网的小编一起回忆下雅思写作的评分标准吧!


一、雅思大作文评分标准:

4分:

跑题、严重偏题,文笔再一般般的话,就是4分。

例句:These lead to new ideas from different vision will happen.

5分:

如果论点无新意,有明显的模板格式,老掉牙的句子多:开头With the development of economy……要么就是More and more people……动不动就“As a result”没完没了地用,通遍一大堆“In my opinion”,“I think”,“There be”句型,这种东西唬弄唬弄四六级也就算了,拿来糊弄GZ,未免有点自讨没趣了。这样的就是5分的固定模式。

例句:Although sticking to one's goal is key to success, sometimes one should be ready to give up.

6分:

文章切题,语句通顺,没有明显错误(小错在6个以内),有一些比较不错的语句(复杂句、排比、倒装、从句等等)就是6分的标准了。

例句:Things should be done to make salaries fairer. Huge amounts of money shall be given to more deserving people. It seems that the only solution is to impose heavy taxes upon people who earn excessively high salaries.

7分:

文笔流畅,错误极少,有个别闪光点就是7分。

例句:Bad traffic and increasing pollution are thorny issues challenging every major city in the globe. To combat such problems, government encourages companies to mark up gas price in an effort to decrease car use and

cut down waste gas. However it may temporarily alleviate the problem, but is doubtfully the optimal solution.

8分:

论点新颖、别具一格,或者文风极富个性,与众不同。能让人留下深刻印象。其他标准同6分的话,就是8分。

或者论点一般,但十分切题。语言很漂亮,令人印象深刻。也是8分(不过一般这样也可以给7分)。

例句:Happiness may mean being a successful and respected leader of a company,or a stable and comfortable job in a large international company, or a big flat downtown,a fantastic set of furniture,etc.

9分:

语句华丽,行文如吟诗作画,笔下冉冉生辉,文章观点别具匠心,让人读了怅然舒爽或义愤填膺、栩栩如生或回味无穷,那就是9分了。很多native都写不出来。在这里就不给例子了,因为不是一两句就能体现得出文章的出彩,必须通读全文,有“神”在文中。

例句:Some people believe it is possible to get the best of both world—they accept the ecnomic advantages of globalization and seek to maintain something of great value-language,tradition and custom.


对于每个评分标准大家已经很熟悉了,希望大家在练习雅思作文时,一定要时刻谨记这些评分标准,在练习中精益求精,在实战中才能稳操胜券。


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下面留学监理网的小编跟大家一起分享一篇优秀的雅思作文:


二、优秀作文欣赏


作文题目:

Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful to society, while others say the purpose is to help individuals to achieve personal ambitions. Please discuss both views and give your opinion.


作文内容:

What does education mean for a person - to gain the knowledge and ability to excel in professional career or to enable him to contribute meaningfully to society? As for me, they are not mutually exclusive, and further, the latter can and does embrace the former.

Narrowly, education facilities an understanding of oneself, providing a chance to enlighten one to know more about what he wants. That is, from kindergarten to university, one gradually realizes his desire that usually comes with different types and requires skills and ability of various kinds to fulfill. Then, in order to make these dreams come into being, he has nothing to do but learn, and more importantly, being educated, other than self learning, is more effective way to expedite this. Consider, for example, a girl who dreams of becoming a nurse. Only by attending the college will she be able to fulfill her ambition.

Then, for a broader perspective, becoming truly education requires sufficient mastery of one particular academic area to permit individuals to make contributions to social development and construction. It is a fact universally acknowledged, that any society is made up by individuals who work in positions of all kinds. Then, through education no matter what form it is, they become knowledgeable citizens and, at the same time, take on the role in their communities. Theoretically, the more education they receive, the more they will pay back to the society. Hence, great benefits eventually accrue to society as a result of education.

To sum up, it is easy for me to draw a conclusion that education amounts to far more than gaining knowledge and ability; that is, it deals people a chance to be entitled to self-determination. And with all these individual efforts coming up together, the society develops greatly.


上述这篇优秀作文,结构合理,逻辑清晰,语法几乎没有错误,语言简练且优美,是一篇不折不扣的优秀作文,大家赶紧收藏吧!


想要写出一篇好的作文,除了要求结构和逻辑上的考虑,还有一点比不可少的就是需要有足够的好词好句的积累。相信大家还没有达到在考场能够妙笔生花的境界,因此,借鉴他人是大家通常会用的套路之一了,而且这也是学习的有效方式之一。


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这里,留学监理网的小编为大家搜罗到一些非常优美的好词佳句,这些句子能够给大家的作文增光添彩,收走不谢哦~~~


三、好词好句积累

1. The concept of indoor farming is not new, since hothouse production of tomatoes andother produce has been in vogue for some time.

be in vogue:正在流行

举一反三,灵活应用:

(1)be out of vogue已不流行(2) come into vogue开始流行(3) go out ofvogue过时了。

(PS:所以不要在用什么popular了,真心弱爆了!)

2. Many believe an entirely new approach to indoor farming is required, employing cutting-edge technologies.

cutting-edge:“用来切东西的那边”——刀刃——尖锐,尖端,锋利——尖端的,先进的

(PS:是不是比developed和advanced都更具画面感)

3. Generating enough light could be prohibitively expensive, unless cheap, renewableenergy is available, and this appears to be rather a future aspiration than a likelihood forthe near future.

prohibit v. 禁止,阻止——prohibitively由于价格或要求过高而阻止了一些人得到——prohibitively过高地

(PS:所以prohibitively expensive极其昂贵是不是比very和extremely更有技术含量?)


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以上就是小编就雅思作文为大家整理的评分标准,优秀范文和好词佳句了,希望大家在雅思作文上继续努力,高分志在必得!更多更好的好词佳句敬请留学监理网的小编更新哦!


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