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很多在留学监理网上下载过《剑桥雅思11》的同学都已经开始做题备考了,留学监理网的老师也会对《剑桥雅思11》上面的题目进行全面地解析。今天,我们就来看一看本书Test1里的小作文。
本题的题干如下:
The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
本题是让大家归纳概括一下六个不同地区对水资源不同用途的比例。根据读图,我们发现我们可以把六个地区分成两组:发达地区组和欠发达地区组。
发达地区组包括:北美和欧洲;
欠发达地区组包括:南美、非洲、中亚和东南亚。
两个组别分别有自己鲜明的特点:发达地区的水资源主要用于工业生产;欠发达地区主要将水资源用于农业生产。
所以我们在写作的时候可以概括着去写,千万不要一张图一张图地描述。另外,每张图上除了工业用水和农业用水之外,还有家庭用水;但是家庭用水的比例没有明确的规律,所以我们可以在写作的时候略去这个数据,而着重分析农业用水和工业用水的比例。
接下来,我们给大家分享一篇留学监理网老师的范文,希望可以帮助到大家。
Sample Response:
The six pie charts show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. We see a huge difference between developing areas and developed ones.
For the developed areas including North America and Europe, much more water is used for industry. Up to 53% of water is used in industries in Europe while only 5% in Central Asia. 12% of the water resources of South East Asia is used for industry which is the highest proportion among the developing areas.
Another distinguished difference is the amount of water used for agriculture. With 88% of water used for agricultural development and production, Central Asia tops among the six areas. However, North America and Europe only distribute 39% and 32% of their water resources respectively in agriculture. Central Asia and South East Asia still rely on agriculture, which is the important source of economic growth, like their ancestors.
The percentage of water used for different purposes reflect the GDP of a certain area as well as its international status. Generally, developed areas use more water for industrial purposes; while developing ones use more water for agricultural productions.
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(注:本范文的分数大概介于7.0-7.5分之间)
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